Response to Teaching The Decades

If I was a techer would I be the same? Would I teach like everyone else? The answer would have to be probably not because I would make school super fun.Now were talking about decades so I probably would push all the books, notebooks and pencils aside. I would make sure all students had computers or laptops. They would be required to have this laptop at all times of class period. They will even talk to me through the computer not have to get out of desks to ask questions. I know my students will get A's on everything or at least the ones who actually try! HMMM not sure what else???

Response to Webquest

Writing Skills


Looking Deeper from Different Perspectives:

Run On Sentence Expert

1. What is a run on sentence? A:is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses are joined with no punctuation or conjunction.

2. How can you correct one? A: you can think of complete sentences as individual "scenes" that can be arranged in five different ways.


3. Write three examples of run on sentences; correct them! A: I make the bed you wash the clothes. Correction: I make the bed and you wash the clothes. She walks I run. Correction: She walks and I run. She kissed him he kissed her. Correction: She kissed him and he kissed her.


Sentence Fragment Expert:

1. What is a sentence fragment? A: incomplete sentences


2.How can you correct one? A: make sure to have a subject and verb.


3. Write three examples of sentence fragments; correct them! A: Because we like him.
Correction: We danced with him because we like him. Because he likes me. Correction: He smiles at me because he likes me. Because she cried. Correction: He watched her because she cried.





Comma Expert:


1. When are you supposed to use commas?


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Paragraph Expert:


1. What is a topic sentence? A:The topic sentence is usually the first sentence of the paragraph. It gives the reader an idea of what the paragraph is going to be about.

2. Write an example of a unified paragraph. A: My dog Bob went running down the street. He jumped over the fence and into the neighbors yard. Bob then started barking at a black cat. Then Bob ran after the cat and hit the fence. Bob ended up knocked out.


3. How can you make a paragraph unified? A: stay on one topic!




Eldridge? I didnt do this in a group I did it by myself!

response to Changing the world PART 2

I am going to change the world by turning off lights when I see they don't need to be on. It will save energy and produce less light but it will be better for the world. You can open your blinds or curtains for light.
I am also going to pick up garbage i see laying around where it doesn't belong. Now days alot of people in our world, country, nation, and so on litter alot. Just as I walked around the other day I saw garbage everywhere. Some of my friends even litter. So it's my time to change the world and make our City a better place. It will be nice and clean for visitors and when we take long walks we wont have to look at a dirty place. I think our city should have more garbage cans around. One day i may ask the mayor about why there is not garbage cans around.
If you see someone litter pick it up or ask them nicely to pick it up. Asking people to help our world shouldn't be harmful. Our world can become a better place if people actually try to make it that way. If there was no world where would we be? Why don't you think about this to yourself and maybe you will want to change the world to. Cleaning, turning off, unplugging, and seeing is not that hard to do, you just can't be lazy about it. I have done five hours of community service in my whole life, but I know i have helped more then that! So it's my time to help and my time has started now.

Response to someone who is making a change part 1

Patch Adams is making a change on the nation by helping many people like Orphans, patients, and etc. He gathers a group of people every year and dresses up as clowns to bring joy and happiness to sick people. Patch and friends founded the Gesundheit Institute, which ran as a free community hospital for 12 years. In October 2007, Patch Adams and the Gesundheit Board unveiled its campaign to raise $1 million towards building a Teaching Center and Clinic on its land in West Virginia. The Center and Clinic will enable Gesundheit to see patients and teach health care design. Adams urges medical students to develop compassionate connections with their patients. His prescription for this kind of care relies on humor and play, which he sees as essential to physical and emotional health. Gesundheit! Institute is a open 40-bed hospital in rural West Virginia that offers free, holistic care to anyone who wants it. Thats what is so good about him because he will help alomost anyone who needs the help for free. Anybody in medical profection who can help people that have no money or no insurance are leaders to me. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gesundheit!_Institute

Response to mini-bio

My name is Jennifer Cheyann Peebles. I was born in Salt Lake city. My birthday is on Fabruary/12/94. I love school. I love to read books only good ones. Im a family type of girl. I love my nephews I have 3 nephews. My brother is like my best freind. Right now Gaby,Anna, and Ivan are my closest friends. i live with my dad and visit my mom. My parents split up when I was nine years old. So i had to start doing things on my own [laundry/dishes/hair]. My dad has a girlfriend and she has a daughter that lives with us. My mom just moved in with her boyfriend. Ima get my permit in August I cant wait. I love the colors yellow and orange. I will write more later!!!!